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Das Leben eines jeden ist ein aufgegebener und im Grunde genommen erfolgloser Versuch des Lebens. Was macht uns glauben, dass dieses Leben unser Leben, dass diese Welt die Welt ist?
Imre Kertész, Galeerentagebuch S.262

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Love the composition as a whole, but I feel like even though it has an obvious focus I am distracted by the surroundings; specifically the long grey area in the middle of the trees.

Great balance of light & dark from left to right, I still feel like it is that background that is distracting to me though. It seems to add some sort of confusion and over-complexity to something that could be very simple and straight-forward.

Though it's a style I've seen quite often, you are very good at what you do. The whole tone of the image is fantastic.
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Corvidae65 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Yup. They need to do another take on this one :rofl: Aweosme capture, Christiane :clap:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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Corvidae65 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
You're welcome :)
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BlindEyeTwist Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
So, jetzt muss ich dir den relativ langen Text, den ich dir erst geschrieben hab, nochmal schreiben, weil irgendwie was schief lief bzw. wegen meiner Schusseligkeit - schade :(


Ich probiers nochmal mit halbwegs den gleichen Worten ;)

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Hallo Christiane :)

kennst du das wenn du bei Deviantart etwas siehst und das dann so toll findest, dass du dir denkst: "Es zu favorisieren ist nicht genug, ich muss einen Kommentar dazu schreiben." - dann aber um die richtigen Worte ringst :D

Ich probiers trotzdem (noch)mal:

Also ich finde zu erstmal, dass das Foto richtig gut zum Text passt.

Das Foto wirkt eher subitl, aber genau das macht den Reiz aus - es wirkt nicht nur tieftraurig, sondern eher schon depressiv, hoffnunglos - wie ein aufgegebener Versuch eben. Gefällt mir :)

Zum Text könnte auch nochmal viel schreiben -aber dann wirds philosophisch :D

woher hast du nur immer so interessante Texte? :)

Übrigens zum Thema: Wir leben in der besten aller möglichen Welten - fand ich das hier:

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ganz interessant ;)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Vielen Dank für den Link, aber vor allem für deinen wunderbaren Kommentar
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BlindEyeTwist Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
es ist mir eine ehre :)

um es mal geschwollen auszudrücken :D
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Miss-Tbones Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great composition and tone!:clap::wow:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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Miss-Tbones Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconmypleasureplz::hug:
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caddman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
...marvelous comp and work...:heart:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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caddman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
...your welcome christiane ...:heart:
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alisinwonder Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
melankoli :)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:nod:
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:iconfilh:
FiLH Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012   Photographer
IN the night of the mind
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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Artmosh Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
nice work! :)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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AiniTolonen Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
:thumbsup:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wave:
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Callme-Ismael Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012   Photographer
Aloha,

das Foto im Zusammenhang mit dem Text... Genial & einfach ein Genuss, der zart auf der Zunge zergeht
Ein Schmaus für die Seel´ & das Auge!

:ahoy:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
vielen Dank
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Callme-Ismael Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012   Photographer
... mir war´s ein Vergnügen ;-)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fein
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Callme-Ismael Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012   Photographer
:bow:

:ahoy:
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inObrAS Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Wonderful work! :clap:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks Andrey
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inObrAS Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
:rose::hug::heart: Christiane!
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Wonderful!!!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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katiousa15 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
You are very welcome!
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FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
diese welt ist die beste aller möglichen, lehrt uns der herr professor leibniz
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
woher der das nun wieder glaubt zu wissen...
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FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aus mathematischer überlegung... es ist teil eines gottesbeweises :))
leibniz wär auch was für deine zitatensammlerei - aber er ist einer der langweiligsten philosophen, die ich kenne. auch seine monaden-theorie... wird heutzutag aber leider wirklichkeit: wir sind alles fensterlose einzelwesen, isoliert und unberührbar.
von voltaire gibt's eine der witzigsten geschichten zur widerlegung der these von der besten aller möglichen welten: 'candide'! das solltest du unbedingt lesen!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
also den anfang von deiner mitteilung versteh ich hoffentlich falsch :D
candide hab ich notiert :D
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CopperColour Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Whooops! I'd rather not travel anywhere near there.
It's looks as if someone had stolen the wooden sleepers.
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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anaPhenix Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
Wonderful one! :heart:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks Ana
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CristianoTeofili Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
wow :clap:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks Cristiano
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CristianoTeofili Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
:thumbsup:
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astrangeallure Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Perfect...balance, tone, composition...love it. :D
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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