Hmm, for me it is perfect. I love the roughness. Maybe it give an unfinished look, but that is what I like it about this work. I mean, you see a man go to work (in my fantasy), so I link it with the roughness.
Very nice abstract Christiane - Like the colours you have chosen and the dedication is perfect - You could have dedicated it to the many Deviants who have packed their bags recently - Full of honest illusion