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like an open wound by scheinbar like an open wound by scheinbar
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I like the amount of contrast in this photograph. My focus is brought right to the incline and there's the pitch black right next to it and then the incline has a greenish tint to it and the textures also stand out. The dried out flaking ground in the front and the hill thing you can see is rough. Also the bubbling to the left with the steam rising from it adds to the photo. I wish I could take photographs like this one. It also looks like you edge burned this? It does a great job to bring the focus to center and it looks very subtle. The color of this makes it work better as well. If it was just ordinary looking it would have been "just another picture" but it makes it look more surreal.
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:iconvrinda-the-wistful:
Vrinda-the-Wistful Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconunseenplz::iconheartblackplz:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Marta, thank you very much
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:iconkorrox:
korrox Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Photographer
erinnert mich an dicke elefantenhaut (der vordergrund)... und darunter brodelt es doch, vielleicht sogar um so heftiger...
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kruste halt.... stimmt schon, irgendwie lebt die

Danke für deine Unterstützung
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:iconkorrox:
korrox Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student Photographer
gerne :ahoy:
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:icondimajaber:
dimajaber Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
feature : [link]
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks so very much :heart:
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:icondimajaber:
dimajaber Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
thank you too :hug:
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:iconpeterle28:
peterle28 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Professional Photographer
Klasse!!!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Danke
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:iconpeterle28:
peterle28 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Professional Photographer
Gerne!
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:iconaugenweide:
augenweide Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
featured here : [link]
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:bow:
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:iconastrangeallure:
astrangeallure Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful. :heart:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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:iconteresaclark:
TeresaClark Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Beautiful shot and treatment!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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:iconharisdrako:
HarisDrako Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
:clap::clap::clap::worship::worship::worship:!!!:iconbigheartplz::iconcupid:
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:iconhalcyonshores:
halcyonshores Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing work, Christiane!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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:iconmartaraff:
martaraff Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
:heart:******
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Ich will auch ... (nach Island) !! ;-)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lohnt sich, das einzig "störende" fototechnisch war: das wunderbare wetter, gleißendes Sonnenlicht, find ich schwierig und die Fülle an Motiven in der kurzen Zeit... die Auswahl hinterher fällt ziemlich schwer :)
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Tja, gleissender Sonnenschein auf Island ... ;-)
Und Aussuchen hinterher ist doch immer das größte Problem,
wieviel tausend Bilder habe ich noch von Mallorca ... ;-)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kanns mir vorstellen... ich nehm manchmal schon keine kamera mehr mit....
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Ja, aber leider sind die schlimmsten Gedanken die, die den Bildern gelten, die man nicht gemacht hat ... ;-)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
du weißt, anscheinend/scheinbar, was ich denke :D
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Scheint so ... ;-)
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Gefällt mir sehr gut mit der Textur. :clap:
Die Wunden scheinen allerdings wirklich noch sehr frisch zu sein...
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
tja, die platzen immer wieder auf.... da fällt mir ein:

mal zu einem gemalten bild von mir...

Wieder aufgebrochen

Zwischen den alten Krusten
Drängt neuer Saft sich hervor
ein Pochen
gemahnt
an den Flügelschlag:
da will nichts
heilen
kann es nicht
aufgebrochen
wieder und wieder
durch die unerbittliche Zeit

Alter Schorf:
Hoffnung
Vergessen
hält das nicht
bricht entzwei
das schiebt sich
zwängt sich
drängt hervor
wieder ans Licht
gleißend grell
unübersehbar


passt hier irgendwie auch, was ich damals geschrieben hab .)
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Dick Salbe drauf, dann wird das schon. Bleibt die Frage: was hilft?
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
also: welche Salbe?
ich bin nicht so der medikamenten-typ,ich hätt gerne, dass mal was heilt :)
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Angeblich Zeit. Kann ich aus eigener Erfahrung allerdings nicht unbedingt empfehlen. Angeblich Ablenkung. Bis das neue Betätigungsfeld alltäglich wird, und die Schmerzen mit voller Wucht zurückkommen. Angeblich positives Denken. Habe mich allerdings lange genug selbst belogen. Vermutlich hilft am besten: Augen zu und durch. Wobei das, ganz im Sinne der Schulmedizin, herumdoktern an den Symptomen ist und nicht an den Ursachen. :)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Danke. Leider hast du recht.
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Am besten gar nicht erst verwunden lassen.
Hört sich immer so einfach an: [link]
Geklappt hat's bei mir bislang auch noch nicht.
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
schau's mir gleich mal an :)
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:iconblindeyetwist:
BlindEyeTwist Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Island scheint beeindruckend zu sein :)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ist es
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:iconfabiokeiner:
FabioKeiner Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
südschwaben sah auch einmal vor ein paar millionen jahren ähnlich aus :)
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ja, ja, :D
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:iconviceberly:
VicEberly Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Eery and otherworldly. Great capture and very nice treatment! :thumbsup:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:thanks::iconthanksplz2: :nod:
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:icontupunoor:
Tupunoor Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Awesome :nod:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:thanks::iconthanksplz2: :nod:
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:iconchristophf:
christophf Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
erdens Nabel
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:thanks::iconthanksplz2: :nod:
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:iconinobras:
inObrAS Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
:thumbsup::nod: Great!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks Andrey.. :):thanks::iconthanksplz2: :nod:
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Canon
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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
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1/2048 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
50 mm
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100
Date Taken
Jun 1, 2012, 11:46:36 AM
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EF50mm f/1.4 USM
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Paint.NET v3.5.10
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