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Im Loch

Heh Du
ich seh Dich
wie Du mich siehst
dort oben
alle 24 Stunden,
wenn die Sonne kurz
den einen Strahl wirft
in die Tiefe meines Brunnenschachts

Ich seh Dich dann
dort oben
Deinen schwarzen Umriss
gegen das grelle Licht
das meine Situation beleuchtet
- kurze Erkenntnis vor langer Agonie

Da stehst Du
bewegungslos
starrst Du herunter
so höre doch
wirf mir die Rettung zu
ein Seil
knote es fest
ich komm schon rauf

So wirf doch endlich
warte das Licht kommt bald
dann siehst du mich wieder
Mitgefühl brauch ich
und Hilfe
so helf mir doch

Und wieder
das Licht
der Blick
sekundenkurz
fällt auf die glatte Oberfäche
des kühlen Wassers
dort unten
im Loch

Inspiriert von Haruki Marukami, Mister Aufziehvogel
Einem Foto von Noel Quidu

Und dem Text von Durs Grünbein, der karthesische Taucher:

„Descartes faßt, nachdem ihm aufgefallen ist, dass die gleichen Vorstellungen, die er im Wachzustand hat, ihn auch im Schlaf heimsuchen, den Entschluss zu einer Fiktion. Fortan will er so tun, als sei nichts, was ihm in den Kopf kam, wahrer als die Trugbilder seiner Träume. Aber ist dies nicht auch die Maxime, nach der jeder halbwegs konsequente Künstler verfährt? In beiden Fällen geht es um denselben Akt der Bewusstwerdung, um einen Salto mortale, bei dem als letzte Gewissheit nur dieses Ich zurückbleibt, das durch alle Sinnestäuschungen hindurch unbeirrbar am Denken festhält. Descartes gesteht sich den doppelten Boden offen ein, wenn er sagt: `Wie lange aber bin ich? Nun, solange ich denke.´ Kein Dichter, der das nicht von sich sagen könnte. Mit einer minimalen Abwandlung freilich: `Wie lange bin ich? Solange ich imaginiere.´" S. 90

Acryl auf Pappe 50x80 cm
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no longer mine
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redrose-on-black Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
i love this i don't speak German so i don't know what you intended but it reminds me of Dante for some reason
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
have you read Harakuri Murakami? There's a story about someone, who was in the same situation... and I played a little bit with his words... what about climbing to the ground to the mirror of the light...probably water reflections...

Thanks so much
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mertonparrish Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
This is beautiful and fascinating...

What does the title mean, what is the poem about, and is it your poem or another's poem?
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mine... and it's about climbing into a whole instead of climbing out :)

Thanks for all your wonderful and kind comments.
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mertonparrish Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Ah, so it is a sad poem?

Most welcome...
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes, indeed..
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djailledie Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured [link]
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BRZR Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
this is a beautiful mind!..
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:thanks:
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RefugeesPride78 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
sehr guter arbeit:clap:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Danke sehr :)
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RefugeesPride78 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
gerne:)
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retransmission Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008   Traditional Artist
very philosophic work!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks so much :)
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atthedawnofRACHEL Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
wow, this is frightening... awesome job
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks so much :) :flowerpot:
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BELLAVISTA2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Beautiful colours and great composition:clap::rose:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks so much :hug:
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BELLAVISTA2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Your very welcome Christaine:iconthankyouplz1:
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karen-d-bee Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Student Photographer
this is stunning...i love it
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh thanks so much :)
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glunac Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008   General Artist
WOW!!!!

Very deep...wonderful colors....wonderful motion!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wow: thanks so much :heart:
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Einfach :wow:
Klasse!:clap:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmm das läuft runter... Danke
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DanStefan Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008   Photographer
good evening
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good morning
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DanStefan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008   Photographer
hello
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CursedOnez Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
delicious!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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CursedOnez Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome mate!
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frenchfox Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
:omfg: Impressive effect !
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks Renard:)
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djRimzi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
Wow, brilliant. Bravo. :thumbsup:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Danke sehr :)
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WinterDruidess Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
Ich liebe your art ahahahXD
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're so very kind...:) love...:heart:
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guzin-guzin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
I love it a lot
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:kiss:
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SLPdomain Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
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I feel this way sometimes..
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so do I :(

Thanks:)
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HAL-2oo6 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
:faint: :shocked: Fantastic work, I love your paintings. :deviation:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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BlueCato Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008   Digital Artist
?
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loojeen Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008
Hummm! I think I got the meaning as a whole! I liked this part"So wirf doch endlich
warte das Licht kommt bald ( I think it means, waiting for the light to come soon :blush:
dann siehst du mich wieder ( Then u see me again)
Mitgefühl brauch ich ( Mitgefühl hummm!! is it something has to do with feelings and help needed? )
und Hilfe
so helf mir doch

Und wieder
das Licht
der Blick
sekundenkurz
fällt auf die glatte Oberfäche
des kühlen Wassers ( cold waters)
dort unten ( down here)
im Loch
BUT the word which is most important to understand is in the title "Loch"?

:giggle:
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"loch" means well

in the story of murakami someone was hit into a well, just to die, probably no help.. noone around

my words are the talking of this man to someone up (he thought (who is standing up there) he can only see him, in the moment when the sunlight
for a few seconds is shining in every day...

but at last: it's his own shadow down there on the cold waters...

Please excuse my horrible English... :(

and thanks so much for trying to understand... where did you learn German?
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loojeen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
Ooooh! It's even more beautiful after clearing the meanings! :airborne: Wie sagt auf German( loooong ago)habe ich Deutsch in der schule gelernt! :)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
and nothing forgotten. I wish I could remember more of the English learned terms... horrible, really...
congrats!

and you make me very glad, if you think the meanings I wrote down fit to the pic...:)
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