I like the ring shape that you've got with the Bokeh in there. I'me not sure what the effect is, but it certainly is cool. Good use off leading line, and very clean focus. The tinting of the highlights, combined with the black border, all give it this wonderful old quality that fits the subject of aged secrets. Your image leaves me inventing stories about what's going on in the image, or what is about to happen. The greatest element that you can put into art is narrative, for when all is said and done, all we take with us are our stories. Your picture tells stories.