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falten by scheinbar falten by scheinbar
Palermo 2010

Was schlimm ist Gottfried Benn

Wenn man kein Englisch kann, von einem guten englischen Kriminalroman hören,
der nicht ins Deutsch übersetzt ist.

Bei Hitze ein Bier sehen,
das man nicht bezahlen kann.

Einen neuen Gedanken haben,
den man nicht in einen Hölderlinvers
einwickeln kann,
wie es die Professoren tun.

Nachts auf Teisen Wellen schlagen hören
und sich sagen, dass sie das immer tun.

Sehr schlimm: eingeladen sein,
wennn zu Hause die Räume stiller,
der Cafe besser
und keine Unterhaltung nötig ist.

Am schlimmsten:
nicht im Sommer sterben,
wenn alles hell ist
und die Erde für Spaten leicht.


Einfach nur wunderbar, oder?

featured here:

:iconchryssalis: [link] :icontatucito: [link]
thanks so much :thanks::nod::wave::iconmypleasure:
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:iconsohighlydubious:
sohighlydubious Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So simple, yet so striking and beautiful.
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :nod::nod::thanks:
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daxusx Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
i like it :love:chris!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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daxusx Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
welcome chris :pray:
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:icontatucito:
tatucito Featured By Owner May 29, 2011
Your work is featured here [link] :hug:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :heart:
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:iconitineraires:
Itineraires Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great angle !
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:iconsciurulus:
sciurulus Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Professional Photographer
nice perspective
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:iconsteve-price:
Steve-price Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010  Student Photographer
Really nice composition and contrast, the lines work really well to lead you through the image. :D
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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Steve-price Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010  Student Photographer
No worries :frog:
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:iconcorvidae65:
Corvidae65 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Yup--this is the view I get when I fall down the steps :icondestroyer77:

:lol:

Well done!
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
Featured [link] :hug:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Athina thanks so much again and again you're very kind my friend :huggle:
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
I'm not kind,i just love and respect your work
and you as a person..
I hope you don't mind me
including your work in my journals,
i'm always going to do so..:tighthug:
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
:clap::clap:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:love:
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:iconhorstschmier:
HorstSchmier Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
Die alltägliche Paranoia =D
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:iconcampo-diaz:
Campo-Diaz Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
Excellent work.
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NateFX Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gefällt mir !
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KalbiCamdan Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
:clap:
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:icontimlasure:
TimLaSure Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Professional Photographer
Wonderful composition! :clap:
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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DasGhul Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010   General Artist
Just a little bit too allgemein to be wunderbar, if you ask me.
But still great! :+fav:
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Dem ist eigentlich nichts hinzuzufügen...
Vor allem nicht der Anmerkung über Kaffee und Konversation!
Sie ist ein traumhafter Aphorismus für jeden der weiß, was sich hinter ICD-10 F40.1 verbirgt.

Eine Ergänzung dazu kann nur Gottfried Benn selbst liefern:

Verhülle dich mit Masken und mit Schminken,
auch blinzle wie gestörten Augenlichts,
laß nie erblicken, wie dein Sein, dein Sinken
sich abhebt von dem Rund des Angesichts.
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
bin 2 Tage weg
und ganz ergriffen von benns worten und weiß nicht,
was sich hinter den buchstaben zahlen verbirgt.
sagst dus mir?
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DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Dann wünsche ich Dir alles Gute! :-)
ICD-10 F40.1 -> [link] oder [link]
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok, jetzt kommt aber natürlich gleich die nächste Frage... bei dir?
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DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Unter anderem.
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmm hab grad ne note geschickt
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DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:huggle:
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PaperPokeMaster Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
Stairs!!! :D
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jonniedee Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
A very unique view. Nice work C!
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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:iconawjay:
awjay Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
excellent perspecyive shot
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:iconscheinbar:
scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
oh i do like this ... :hug:
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