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October 29, 2010
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Canon
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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/6317 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
28 mm
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640
Date Taken
May 23, 2010, 7:12:10 PM
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EF28mm f/2.8
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Paint.NET v3.5.5
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Palermo by scheinbar Palermo by scheinbar
Palermo not Amsterdam
Orange

Palermo 2010
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:iconjonniedee:
Christiane, you always have such fantastic work. The composition is really done well in this shot. I enjoy how the shirts are such dominant figures. The asymmetrical look, is quite intriguing. At first I thought it everything was symmetrical, but from closer inspection, I see that is not the case. This makes me want to look at everything. I'm glad you left a little sliver of the sky in this too. My only criticism is that bottom right corner. The yellow, black and red sign/shape is a bit distracting. All in all, this is a really strong piece and I enjoyed looking at it.
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dermamred Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Where did U get this one? (...I'm asking 'cos I live in Palermo and am just curious to know where.)
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scheinbar Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love Palermo, but I really don't know in what street I saw that, sorry :hug:
wish I was there in the moment :(
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dermamred Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
If I had to find that street, I'll make U know about.
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scheinbar Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :)
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dermamred Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Pas de quoi.
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mariozeus120 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Italy is such an ancient place

Viva l'Italia
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BlindEyeTwist Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Ich mag die Perspektive :)
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LauraTringaliHolmes Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
A mighty photo!
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scheinbar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks
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takmandi Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
just a personal opinion: I am quite anal about straight horizon photos, meaning the the lines are perfectly horizontal in every way possible. In this case, to me the focal point is the railings with shirts. Therefore, if i were you, I would rotate or 'tilt' the photo to make the base of the whole 'balcony' perfectly horizontal.

I also believed this has been cropped, but a minor adjustment would be the tiny little edge on the right, beside those cable(?).

NO Offence really, but great job anyhow! :)
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